I can see every line change on your face still
Every bent brow move with new thrills
Eyes that express more than thousand words
A gaze that cuts through silence with swords.
Eye lashes curled to cover the sneakish peak,
Lips pursed as though your about to speak.
You blow a thick smoke way above ground
And then be smug and look for smiles all around.
A hoarse voice to bowl everyone over
A wit that makes a drunken b’com sober!
Memory has captured what a lens would not
And still u say a PHOTO I have not????
9 comments:
nice lines...
sometimes... its just that the photographs of ppl we hold within are just not worthy enuf of that...
so its always del *.*
:P
and as for photographic memory... its my gift.. its my curse...
:D
Today unspoken time is standing here still and alone
Why do moments of past keep calling me again and again
Very Nice !!! amazing how life is captured in so little .......
bhery subtle... :-)
"Eye lashes curled to cover the sneakish peak,
Lips pursed as though your about to speak."
Love the word picture you draw here and with amazing economy of expression too!!
And...
"Memory has captured what a lens would not
And still u say a PHOTO I have not????"
Now, that's a complete poem in its own right!! The sort of lines that go in the 'Quotable Quotes' section!! :)
very nice !!
who is the dream boy you are talking about here :)) :))
Amazing!!! Very well written, good anology of behavior and very gifted observation ..
Definitely very flattering for the guy it has been written for ;)
ok ppl!! thanks a ton for ur comments!!!
And yeah the "dream boy" as jeet said hehhehehe i guess would be very flattered :D
hehehehehe Stranger than fiction this is ;)
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