Thursday, September 25, 2008

Moments ...

I know I’m expressive
And the look was all u needed
I shouldn’t be writing this
But this time my heart has pleaded
I love u way too much now to stop
I have to say it else I’ll drop
Today the rhyme is not even there
I think the minds got no time to spare
All I want to say is flowing out
I feel like I need to burst out and Shout!!!
And say Oh Babe Ur the best!!!
U put even my restless mind to rest!
I can’t begin to imagine now a day without you
I know u think of the same thing too
Time will pass and spaces shall fill
You and I, together will be still
If not by distance but in time we reside
No one can take from us these moments kept aside!!!


[This piece has been long due as I hadn't found the appropriate words ...i still think i could do better but well here it is... dyin to go out to her..... RICHA]

7 comments:

Tanmay said...

it sounded like a lesbian poem to me!!..

Priyanka said...

well tanny good for u...i see there's something in it for everyone :P

Shreeram said...

B E A utiful.... :)

Jeet said...

anti-climax.. richa kahan se aa gayi? good poem though :)

Richa said...

Am honoured!!! :)
Wish you'd told me, wouldn't have given you such a hard time with my critical and editing comments!! ;)

It's emotional and beautiful, despite what this shaiTAN MAY say!!

Urvi said...

i mirror and second every single emotion expressed by Priyanka for Richa...lesbianism or not-MAS(T) to pakka hai!! (Mutual Admiration Society??!! frm which Tanmay is unceremoniously excluded for his mean comment!!)

shanky said...

hEE hEE hEE
nicEE
wallEE
hornEE for a ladEE!!!!